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In Due Time (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld
Thy could not wonder When thy could not see Unspoken truths without beliefs If thee did not know Then thee may not be Wanting to be a little more like thy Pondering revenge in due time While the carnivious reptiles,Eat my spine The blood it spats out Out of my back Everything ends, and thats a fact This is not a crying game In fact that would be quite a shame I burst out in laughter, as you cry in tears The boogy-man is dead, so theirs nothing to fear I don't know much, and nor do you I don't even know why the sky is blue Everything is explained at a later day The sky will soon turn to grey In due time this will become true Because soon it will rain And the sky no longer will be blue

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9466
Posted: October 19, 2003 10:40 PM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2003 10:40 PM PDT
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[6] the_poetess @ 205.188.116.139 | 14-Apr-05/1:30 PM | Reply
this is almost too weird but not quite
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