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Educating the Flame (Free verse) by Enkidu
Here we squat
In reckless existence.
Bringing friction
Not where friction belongs,
But to a chance:
A shot into the waning light,
A point unseen in the smoky darkness.
We toil endlessly until
The fever becomes us;
Until we sift through the falsities
And the half-truths-
Until we become unafraid.
However,
To be unafraid is to be brash,
And it is to be stubborn;
To be at times,
In often great naivety,
Stupid.
The product of our labor writhes.
It twists in eternal chaos,
While the foolish peer closer-
Teaching the fire its power.
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Posted: August 1, 2005 9:41 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2005 9:41 PM PDT
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