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Educating the Flame

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Aug 2005 · 0 comments

Here we squat In reckless existence. Bringing friction Not where friction belongs, But to a chance: A shot into the waning light, A point unseen in the smoky darkness. We toil endlessly until The fever becomes us; Until we sift through the falsities And the half-truths- Until we become unafraid. However, To be unafraid is to be brash, And it is to be stubborn; To be at times, In often great naivety, Stupid. The product of our labor writhes. It twists in eternal chaos, While the foolish peer closer- Teaching the fire its power.

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