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free (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 Here I am fallen to my knees
And still I cannot break free
I want to be alone
So I can save my sanity
But I just can't break free
Last night you held me
It felt so good to feel your heart beating
Even though I knew it was fleeting
It still felt freeing
I'm still trapped here in this place
And still I feel low
I've got to break free
And save myself from misery
take in these last moments
For they will only be a memory
As I slip from your arms
And fade from your life
As forever more I break free
Up the ladder:
fumes
Down the ladder:
Hurtin' Once Again
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Posted: November 16, 2003 7:07 PM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2003 7:07 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9513 Comments:
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Shardik @ 24.126.116.54
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17-Nov-03/12:19 AM
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Slut.
I've only written about 4 guys. sure fine... but I've only felt this about one of them
I wanna scream so loudly I deafen myself
I wanna beat the walls around me till they fall Iâm not gonna allow myself to be put that low Not gonna stand for what others put me through They can judge me and I say fuck that I am who I am and I donât think I deserve anything less If you fuck me over I fuck you up Donât come messinâ with me Iâm too risky When Iâm done with you, youâll wish youâd followed that bright light at the end of the tunnel
he pissed me off.
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