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free (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

Here I am fallen to my knees And still I cannot break free I want to be alone So I can save my sanity But I just can't break free Last night you held me It felt so good to feel your heart beating Even though I knew it was fleeting It still felt freeing I'm still trapped here in this place And still I feel low I've got to break free And save myself from misery take in these last moments For they will only be a memory As I slip from your arms And fade from your life As forever more I break free

Freethinker1602 17-Nov-03/12:38 AM
I've only written about 4 guys. sure fine... but I've only felt this about one of them




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