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Transfer (Lyric) by Miggy
I noticed from my dirty windowsill How if it weren't for the rain That the world would be standing still And everyday would be the same I try to escape all the re-runs Each second not different from the past Looking for some way to have some fun As boring as if it were the past (Chorus) Can you transfer me into the fast lane Transfer me away from my ailing pain Please bring me away, bring me somewhere new So I can escape my life with you So long how I felt my days too dry Desperate to find a different thing to try Something to put a colorful spice Just to taste another slice (out of life) (Chorus) Don't set me just sit back And fall away in this nightmare It's too hard to even bare To think of everything my life lacks (Chorus/Ending)


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9545455
Weighted score: 6.9193907
Overall Rank: 202
Posted: June 26, 2003 11:36 AM PDT; Last modified: June 26, 2003 11:36 AM PDT
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[9] KagatoSan @ 162.83.202.135 | 27-Jun-03/6:26 PM | Reply
Hey, Miggy Miggy Gordita! hehe, nice..... You realy got to put this to a demo tape. i cant really decide the rhythem. lol srry if i cant
[7] cherish @ 68.51.210.55 | 25-Oct-03/7:50 AM | Reply
pretty good :)
[7] Lindz14 @ 65.93.139.23 | 18-Aug-05/8:11 AM | Reply
It's your thang -7-
Lindz14
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