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Heather Dee 4.179.49.131 |
10-Sep-05/9:59 PM |
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Wow what do I say a bit difficult to understand or grasp but i'll give you credit at least a little
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| Re: People by hendrimike |
7!3 219.95.9.227 |
10-Sep-05/10:41 PM |
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| Re: Distracted by pletcgm |
7!3 219.95.9.227 |
10-Sep-05/10:47 PM |
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| Re: Generations by Revekka |
Heather Dee 4.178.117.131 |
10-Sep-05/10:57 PM |
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| Re: proverbs by Montinequego |
Heather Dee 4.178.117.131 |
10-Sep-05/10:58 PM |
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| Re: For you by Montinequego |
Heather Dee 4.178.117.131 |
10-Sep-05/11:06 PM |
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I REALLY LIKE IT BUT I CANT HELP FEELING LIKE I HAVE READ SOMETHING VERY SIMILAR BEFORE
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| Re: Tears and Tombstones by OnTheOtherHand |
Heather Dee 4.178.117.131 |
10-Sep-05/11:09 PM |
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Very nice although I think you could have thought of a better line for "They always want a personal account of Hell"
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| Re: A Song for the Street by Numen |
Heather Dee 4.178.117.131 |
10-Sep-05/11:12 PM |
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Wow-u need not say any more
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| Re: No More Autumn Poems (Edit) by Sasha |
Heather Dee 4.178.117.131 |
10-Sep-05/11:26 PM |
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I actually like this one. Not that this matters to you. I know that my "teenage like writting style" isn't what you would consider to be of any valute. So I highly doubt you will care to hear sugg. I might have regarding this poem
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| Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
Heather Dee 4.179.52.168 |
11-Sep-05/6:35 AM |
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I can't seem to find the right words to describe what I am feeling after reading this.............Bravo!!!!
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| Re: i need a title by That One |
Heather Dee 4.179.52.168 |
11-Sep-05/6:37 AM |
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| Re: hate by ts |
Heather Dee 4.179.52.168 |
11-Sep-05/6:45 AM |
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I liked the poem just not all the spelling errors
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zodiac 86.108.19.170 |
11-Sep-05/8:41 AM |
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| Re: Addendum to the Heartbreak by Miggy |
zodiac 86.108.19.170 |
11-Sep-05/9:42 AM |
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This is just one of your million other identical songs that you've Shift+F7'ed every word of. Newsflash: Big words don't make you not awful. -0-
PS-I'm thinking of naming my next band "Shut Up the Baby". Do you get it?
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Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.57 |
11-Sep-05/11:33 AM |
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This is so depressing... I love it.
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| Re: The Ship by Tainted Butterfly |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.57 |
11-Sep-05/11:41 AM |
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Lose the fourth stanza and it would rock. By the third everyone reading this know it's about you. You pull it off at the end by making it about Everywoman/child. -7- for now.
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| Re: My Big Butt by Dovina |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
11-Sep-05/3:59 PM |
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"36-24-36
Only if she's 5'3"
A full booty is beautiful.
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ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
11-Sep-05/4:43 PM |
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A bit repetitious. That may be a reflection of your life. Try mixing your drinks up a little.
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| Re: My addict by Heather Dee |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
11-Sep-05/4:46 PM |
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Courtney Love! Is that you?
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| Re: The Thief by Niphredil |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
11-Sep-05/5:11 PM |
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Good subject. Timings good. You don't reveal the outcome too soon.
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