Heather Dee
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2005, 9:59 PM
Wow what do I say a bit difficult to understand or grasp but i'll give you credit at least a little
lol funny..
lol nice.
VERY NICE!!!!
THIS IS REALLY STRANGE
I REALLY LIKE IT BUT I CANT HELP FEELING LIKE I HAVE READ SOMETHING VERY SIMILAR BEFORE
Very nice although I think you could have thought of a better line for "They always want a personal account of Hell"
Wow-u need not say any more
I can't seem to find the right words to describe what I am feeling after reading this.............Bravo!!!!
I like..............
I liked the poem just not all the spelling errors
This is so depressing... I love it.
Lose the fourth stanza and it would rock. By the third everyone reading this know it's about you. You pull it off at the end by making it about Everywoman/child. -7- for now.
"36-24-36
Only if she's 5'3"
A full booty is beautiful.
I actually like this one. Not that this matters to you. I know that my "teenage like writting style" isn't what you would consider to be of any valute. So I highly doubt you will care to hear sugg. I might have regarding this poem
What does "Bad light boosts England chances" mean?
http://news.bbc.co.uk/sport1/hi/cricket/ 4234498.stm
This is just one of your million other identical songs that you've Shift+F7'ed every word of. Newsflash: Big words don't make you not awful. -0-
PS-I'm thinking of naming my next band "Shut Up the Baby". Do you get it?
A bit repetitious. That may be a reflection of your life. Try mixing your drinks up a little.
Courtney Love! Is that you?