| Re: Monsters by wilco |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
23-May-06/10:55 AM |
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I like this a lot, but think "monsters" is too strong a word to describe them. They're not that bad - just trying to get by.
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| Re: Witch hanging at Dunchurch by Mona Lisa |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
23-May-06/11:03 AM |
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An historical event like this requires, in my opinion, a longer development, prior to the punch line. A more flowing form might work better.
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| Re: Split Me by Sunny |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
23-May-06/11:06 AM |
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If this is about open-chest surgery, it's very dramatic. But I have a problem with the patient knowing what is taking place while under anaesthesia.
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| Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
23-May-06/11:47 AM |
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your satire is about as sharp as the unwashed bum.
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wilco 24.92.74.122 |
23-May-06/1:54 PM |
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Hey, you've really improved since I've been gone. Good job. I like it.
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wilco 24.92.74.122 |
23-May-06/1:56 PM |
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I always enjoy your poems, pal. This isn't my favorite, but I like it okay.
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ALChemy 71.75.176.68 |
23-May-06/3:26 PM |
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I like the metaphorical middle finger you give her at the end. You should rent a movie called "Dream Lover" with James Spader in it. You'd love the ending.
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| Re: 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
23-May-06/3:48 PM |
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interesting. i can see how this is quickly sketched together and that it is the result of a conversation.
tough material to work with, but pretty clever and funny. i'm really torn between an -8- and -9-, but since you had the guts to post this, i will round up.
;)
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8 |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73 |
23-May-06/3:56 PM |
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8 |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73 |
23-May-06/3:57 PM |
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Stupid self-promoting drivel. This is not an advertising location, mongol.
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| Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73 |
23-May-06/3:58 PM |
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Long winded self-indulgent unpoetic piffle.
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| Re: Horus8 Live, a benefit for materialism by horus8 |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73 |
23-May-06/3:59 PM |
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More stupid advertising for your worthless "music". No wonder this site has voted you a wanker.
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| Re: Actor by horus8 |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73 |
23-May-06/4:01 PM |
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| Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73 |
23-May-06/4:02 PM |
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Illiterate and grossly mis-punctuated. Up to your usual standards of bollocks.
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| Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove |
TanHand 65.78.25.23 |
23-May-06/5:59 PM |
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"Up the ladder: leah
Down the ladder: IN THESE DREAMS FOREVER "
Welcome to hell. How does a titmouse carry so many textbooks? Tweet tweet (that's how). Props to Jeremi Handrinos if he's still around.
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| Re: Numbers add to nothing by Caducus |
crazyknight 211.74.198.37 |
23-May-06/7:57 PM |
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not my type............no depth, no substance
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| Re: Goa by amanda_dcosta |
crazyknight 211.74.198.37 |
23-May-06/8:03 PM |
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I would love to be in a place where an attractive woman attracts a zillion men, for they are men. Not like the places where the heart of men are carved in stone or corrupted by the strangest attractions......
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Edna Sweetlove 81.178.225.223 |
24-May-06/3:47 PM |
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Rotal and utter rubbish. 10/10 for crap.
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Edna Sweetlove 81.178.225.223 |
24-May-06/3:48 PM |
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| Re: sick and demented by sk8boardandpoems |
Edna Sweetlove 81.178.225.223 |
24-May-06/3:49 PM |
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10/10 for muck; 0/10 for merit.
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