Edna Sweetlove
on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8
23 May 2006, 3:56 PM
Trash.
not my type............no depth, no substance
Long winded self-indulgent unpoetic piffle.
Stupid self-promoting drivel. This is not an advertising location, mongol.
More stupid advertising for your worthless "music". No wonder this site has voted you a wanker.
I would love to be in a place where an attractive woman attracts a zillion men, for they are men. Not like the places where the heart of men are carved in stone or corrupted by the strangest attractions......
"Up the ladder: leah
Down the ladder: IN THESE DREAMS FOREVER "
Welcome to hell. How does a titmouse carry so many textbooks? Tweet tweet (that's how). Props to Jeremi Handrinos if he's still around.
Rotal and utter rubbish. 10/10 for crap.
10/10 for drivel.
10/10 for muck; 0/10 for merit.
interesting. i can see how this is quickly sketched together and that it is the result of a conversation.
tough material to work with, but pretty clever and funny. i'm really torn between an -8- and -9-, but since you had the guts to post this, i will round up.
;)
More horsedung.
Edna Sweetlove
on Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8
23 May 2006, 4:02 PM
Illiterate and grossly mis-punctuated. Up to your usual standards of bollocks.
Hey, you've really improved since I've been gone. Good job. I like it.
I always enjoy your poems, pal. This isn't my favorite, but I like it okay.
I like the metaphorical middle finger you give her at the end. You should rent a movie called "Dream Lover" with James Spader in it. You'd love the ending.
An historical event like this requires, in my opinion, a longer development, prior to the punch line. A more flowing form might work better.
your satire is about as sharp as the unwashed bum.