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Senryu № 143576

Witch hanging at Dunchurch

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 May 2006 · 1 comment

Pale pendulum creaks. Feathered reapers scythe souls hung for a birthmark.

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[6] Dovina 23-May-06/11:03 AM Reply
An historical event like this requires, in my opinion, a longer development, prior to the punch line. A more flowing form might work better.