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Witch hanging at Dunchurch (Senryu) by Mona Lisa Pale pendulum creaks.
Feathered reapers scythe souls
hung for a birthmark.
Up the ladder:
in love
Down the ladder:
what a load
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Posted: May 23, 2006 8:09 AM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2006 8:09 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11240 Comments:
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Dovina @ 17.255.240.6
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23-May-06/11:03 AM
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An historical event like this requires, in my opinion, a longer development, prior to the punch line. A more flowing form might work better.
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