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Witch hanging at Dunchurch (Senryu) by Mona Lisa

Pale pendulum creaks. Feathered reapers scythe souls hung for a birthmark.

Dovina 23-May-06/11:03 AM
An historical event like this requires, in my opinion, a longer development, prior to the punch line. A more flowing form might work better.




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