| Re: Belong by creepshow |
Person 68.251.34.0 |
16-Aug-06/8:04 PM |
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If I understood that right, in which I think I did, then now I know why your name is "creepshow" =) Anyways I thought it was put together well...8?
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| Re: Chickens by rnuk |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.202.117 |
17-Aug-06/3:26 AM |
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Interesting, although a faulty analogy with Marxism. I would have thought the poem fitted Capitalism better.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.202.117 |
17-Aug-06/3:32 AM |
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What am amusing little anecdote. Which of your simian relations is this about?
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| Re: The Midget Angel On The Hideous Field Of Death by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
17-Aug-06/9:31 AM |
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| Re: Chickens by rnuk |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
17-Aug-06/9:31 AM |
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| Re: Edna's Father's Day Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
17-Aug-06/9:34 AM |
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| Re: Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:11 PM |
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Surely the penultimate line should be
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
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| Re: Untitled (a draft) by rnuk |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:13 PM |
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Your best one so far. I liked "shoulderless shrug".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
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| Re: The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=- |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.227.59 |
17-Aug-06/4:18 PM |
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| Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus |
Caducus 86.137.20.84 |
18-Aug-06/6:35 AM |
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how the fuck did this shite turn up on the best list - someone get it down
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| Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
18-Aug-06/9:57 AM |
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Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
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| Re: Visiting My Heart by drnick |
amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158 |
18-Aug-06/10:04 AM |
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Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
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| Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove |
MacFrantic 129.82.152.106 |
19-Aug-06/10:47 AM |
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This is one of the funniest things i have ever read, and that a fantastic accomplishment. i can only give you a ten, but i wish i could give you more, if you know what i mean...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.230.114 |
19-Aug-06/4:58 PM |
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| Re: My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:14 AM |
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I have always found a large plastic bag is sufficient to keep small rodents still during sodomy. Lovely poem, keep 'em rolling. Let's roll, in fact.
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| Re: 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:19 AM |
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Deliciously illiterate and incompetent. I have read better things on toilet walls.
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| Re: Over beast by Crakyamuni |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:20 AM |
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You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:20 AM |
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| Re: the servers' reaction to gypsies by ~incarnate~ |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.241.139 |
20-Aug-06/5:22 AM |
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Quite interesting but spoiled by using dud grammar/slang occasionally (eg "close minded") and an abence of punctuation.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Crakyamuni 131.252.231.145 |
20-Aug-06/4:05 PM |
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ludicrousness sounds like ridiculousness and serendipitousness/ hella awkward.
hella- other wise engaging
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