Edna Sweetlove
on The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=-
17 Aug 2006, 4:18 PM
Genius.
how the fuck did this shite turn up on the best list - someone get it down
What am amusing little anecdote. Which of your simian relations is this about?
Your best one so far. I liked "shoulderless shrug".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
Interesting, although a faulty analogy with Marxism. I would have thought the poem fitted Capitalism better.
Engelbert Humpalot
on The Midget Angel On The Hideous Field Of Death by Edna Sweetlove
17 Aug 2006, 9:31 AM
Fucking hilarious. 10.
Stupid trite trash. 0/10
Delightfully caring.
Surely the penultimate line should be
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
MacFrantic
on A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove
19 Aug 2006, 10:47 AM
This is one of the funniest things i have ever read, and that a fantastic accomplishment. i can only give you a ten, but i wish i could give you more, if you know what i mean...
OK, I suppose.
I have always found a large plastic bag is sufficient to keep small rodents still during sodomy. Lovely poem, keep 'em rolling. Let's roll, in fact.
Deliciously illiterate and incompetent. I have read better things on toilet walls.
You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
Pathetic.
Quite interesting but spoiled by using dud grammar/slang occasionally (eg "close minded") and an abence of punctuation.
ludicrousness sounds like ridiculousness and serendipitousness/ hella awkward.
hella- other wise engaging