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Edna Sweetlove on Pump the Guns by oddgreenout 18 Oct 2006, 1:09 PM
tripe
Dovina on Pope Benedict And The Limbo Problem by Edna Sweetlove 17 Oct 2006, 12:58 PM
Already a 10! It will soon work "its" way to the best list.
Edna Sweetlove on Waiting for the Doctor by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 1:01 PM
Brilliant rhyme scheme. 0/10 and count yourself lucky I'm feeling generous.
daniella on 11th September (a senyru) by scitz 19 Oct 2006, 4:11 AM
9/11 was an inside job. connect all the mind boggling dots at: www.loosechange911.com/index_main.html wake up america
Dovina on Work by half.italian 17 Oct 2006, 12:56 PM
"Loophole" is one word. A bit wordy: "This time I watched a movie that reminded me of life It woke me from boredom" could be "A movie woke me from boredom."
Edna Sweetlove on snot by fattony 18 Oct 2006, 1:08 PM
This showed considerable promise until that 4th line. I suggest the last line should read: "in the matted nose hairs i clipped so short" And you spell nostril with an "i", dearie.
Shuushin on Crappy by drnick 17 Oct 2006, 7:24 AM
It isn't really clear what this is about (in the poem - the commented reference makes it, if not meaningless, inconsequential). rain sliding down the window is approximately as primitive as one can get when describing rain sliding down a window.
Ranger on Your Eyes by Dovina 17 Oct 2006, 3:07 PM
Nice
some deleted user on Your Eyes by Dovina 17 Oct 2006, 6:59 PM
sweet !
drnick on Your Eyes by Dovina 17 Oct 2006, 8:45 PM
This seems quite different from what you normally write, but I definately like it!
Edna Sweetlove on PURPLE COWS by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 12:58 PM
About as funny as the last outbreak of the Black Death.
Edna Sweetlove on Let's Do a Test by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 1:01 PM
not so gooding? You must have been desperate for a rhyme, dearie. 0/10 again.
Edna Sweetlove on Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus! 18 Oct 2006, 1:03 PM
Howlingly funny! I love this!
Edna Sweetlove on Young Dead Flesh by Harry Hunt 18 Oct 2006, 1:05 PM
Quite amusing But confusing
Edna Sweetlove on Crappy by drnick 17 Oct 2006, 6:57 AM
Puerile. Unamusing. Not witty. Not clever. Badly punctuated. And those are some of the better aspects.
Edna Sweetlove on Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 17 Oct 2006, 6:59 AM
ISRAEL Land of broken promises Land stolen from the Palestians Land of liars, crooks and murderers Land supported by the Yanks Land hopefully to disappear from the map
Edna Sweetlove on Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 17 Oct 2006, 7:01 AM
This poem has been posted twice. This copy is just as applalling as the first posting. Sickening. Israel is a rogue usurping state, hated by all except the Americans.
half.italian on Your Eyes by Dovina 18 Oct 2006, 2:45 AM
Great poem. It flows incredibly well for me until the last line. At first read I thought the reference to self bothered me, but now I'm not so sure. It just doesn't seem to fit with the rest. Honestly, I don't understand (as other posters mention) how your work varies in quality so much. Farewell Kind Lover was another diamond, but most of the stuff in between I haven't liked very much. Anyway, this is great.
Edna Sweetlove on One Nation Under God by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 12:57 PM
This is truly, sickeningly, repellently awful. One nation under God? Are you crazy? America is a racial mish-mash, a mixture of demented bible-thumping creationist Christians, aggressive psychopathic ill-educated redneck patriots and sentimental sloppy hypocrites. And those are the better Americans!
Edna Sweetlove on Fifty if Nifty by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 1:00 PM
This will make 'em roll in the aisles down at your local tabernacle.