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D. $ Fontera on Smalltalkers by D. $ Fontera 19 Oct 2006, 12:53 PM
hence the title
Dovina on Smalltalkers by D. $ Fontera 19 Oct 2006, 11:50 AM
Sounds like what my father called "beating artound the bush." Not very well organized.
Dovina on some deleted poem 19 Oct 2006, 11:52 AM
Has a nice rattle of words. Drop the last line, I say. But you probably have some reason for it.
Ranger on Canada by PodPoet 21 Oct 2006, 5:40 PM
You're not from Canada, I see. Check out the Arrogant Worms' self-penned national anthem, 'Canada's Really Big'.
Dovina on connect the dots by daniella 19 Oct 2006, 11:46 AM
Ok, I looked at the site, but didn't stay there long. If you have a political statment to make in a poem, it would be better to make it, I think, rather than just referung to a URL.
Dovina on A DANCE OF NO TUNE by stevopoet 19 Oct 2006, 11:43 AM
"Heaping up dance on my hips" - good line. But starting every line with an "ing" word is a bit boring. "Shaking ones head" takes the "me" out of it. Is English your second language? If so, not bad.
drnick on MRS Degree by Miggy 20 Oct 2006, 10:11 AM
This has to be country lyrics because the only way you could get away with this simplistic nonsense is if you were singing it to a bunch of inbred republicans. Do you honestly think you're improving? Do you even care? Do you actually spend the amount of time from one post to another for working on these lyrics? Let me break it down for you: YOU ARE TERRIBLE, THESE ARE THE WORST "LYRICS" I HAVE SEEN/HEARD SINCE YOUR LAST POST. EITHER STOP WRITING OR HEADBUTT THE SHARP END OF A KNIFE.
drnick on Pope Benedict And The Limbo Problem by Edna Sweetlove 20 Oct 2006, 10:13 AM
Amazing, I need to go rethink my life.
PodPoet on Prologue by Dovina 21 Oct 2006, 10:57 AM
Haha this is humorous and thoughtful. A poet's poem. Nice work.
Ranger on Prologue by Dovina 21 Oct 2006, 5:23 PM
Excellent, D. I think this could be read as a monologue (referencing back to the title) wherein the poet is arguing with him/herself, or it could be an exchange between two. Do you know, if half the people on All Poetry took this view, the amount of poems online would be reduced by a massive percentage?
Ranger on A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 20 Oct 2006, 10:56 AM
-10-
Dovina on Slur by MacFrantic 20 Oct 2006, 3:42 PM
Nothingness and everything? Have at it.
pete on weather poem part 1: the wolf journal by nypoet22 21 Oct 2006, 7:02 AM
well; got blown away by this; took it slow and let it speak to me , then saw all this sour-face bitchin and wondered what that was all about. in some of us poetry is a continuum and it being broken up in chunks merely a convention ( sez he pompously)... anyhow, 8 for now and will return to it later
Engelbert Humpalot on Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 19 Oct 2006, 5:51 PM
Staggeringly repulsive load of old garbage!
Engelbert Humpalot on May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus! 19 Oct 2006, 5:53 PM
Fabulous title and the words live up to it. This deserves to be the worst poem on this site for ever!
Engelbert Humpalot on Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus! 19 Oct 2006, 5:54 PM
Horrendous!
Engelbert Humpalot on Wanking In The Bucket by Edna Sweetlove 19 Oct 2006, 5:55 PM
Great. I love wanking.
Engelbert Humpalot on some deleted poem 19 Oct 2006, 5:56 PM
Horsedung.
pete on connect the dots by daniella 21 Oct 2006, 6:43 AM
I looked at the site and watched the whole film and would recommend any others to do the same; i think this counts as a bit more than a political statement; 10 for the lead 6 for the poem
pete on Work by half.italian 21 Oct 2006, 6:48 AM
lol :)