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connect the dots (Free verse) by daniella can an URL unfurl
anything for you?
can you rhyme
www.loosechange911.com
to make it resound
and wake up america from
the fall that's coming round.
Up the ladder:
Life
Down the ladder:
Pointless like many things
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Posted: October 19, 2006 4:14 AM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2006 4:14 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10269 Comments:
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Dovina @ 70.38.78.229
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19-Oct-06/11:46 AM
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Ok, I looked at the site, but didn't stay there long. If you have a political statment to make in a poem, it would be better to make it, I think, rather than just referung to a URL.
I looked at the site and watched the whole film and would recommend any others to do the same; i think this counts as a bit more than a political statement; 10 for the lead 6 for the poem
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