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the truth (Free verse) by i_am_the_popsicle
What to do when the truth that you know to be true is not the truth that you want. Not saying that you wish you were ignorant of anything, (though you might be happier if you were.) Just saying that true is a look in the mirror we have all been avoiding, and true is the monster hiding under everyones bed.

Up the ladder: mass on key
Down the ladder: medieval myth

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10250
Posted: April 9, 2005 11:53 AM PDT; Last modified: April 9, 2005 11:53 AM PDT
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[n/a] New Life Drug @ 69.106.241.184 | 10-Apr-05/8:46 PM | Reply
would have sounded better if "true" were replaced with "truth" although the meaning remains the same.
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