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Prologue (Free verse) by Dovina
Well. Well what? Well, here we are. Preposterous! A poet must start sure-footedly. Ah, but beginning is not easy. If you find it so difficult, why do you insist on writing. Because I have something to say. Thank heaven for that. What is it? If I could tell you, I would have said it already. And since you have not said it, you cannot tell me? Precisely. Congratulations! Your poem is a model of brevity.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3169
Posted: October 20, 2006 3:33 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2006 3:33 PM PDT
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[7] PodPoet @ 68.107.89.26 | 21-Oct-06/10:57 AM | Reply
Haha this is humorous and thoughtful. A poet's poem. Nice work.
[n/a] Dovina @ 70.38.78.229 > PodPoet | 23-Oct-06/2:49 PM | Reply
I thought it was only slightly more clever than droning on about writer’s block.
[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 21-Oct-06/5:23 PM | Reply
Excellent, D. I think this could be read as a monologue (referencing back to the title) wherein the poet is arguing with him/herself, or it could be an exchange between two.

Do you know, if half the people on All Poetry took this view, the amount of poems online would be reduced by a massive percentage?
[n/a] Dovina @ 70.38.78.229 > Ranger | 23-Oct-06/2:49 PM | Reply
I read it at a poetry workshop, asking an old man to read the indented lines. Everyone thought it was rather funny. That’s a group of poets for you. I think the general public would think it’s just silly
[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > Dovina | 23-Oct-06/4:11 PM | Reply
Ah, but the general public is mostly stupid. Then again, if the internet's anything to go by, so are most poets. You, fortunately, are not.
[n/a] Dovina @ 70.38.78.229 > Ranger | 23-Oct-06/4:13 PM | Reply
And there I have another reason for saying you are more fun to argue with than zodiac.
[8] nypoet22 @ 65.10.116.105 | 22-Oct-06/8:53 PM | Reply
i'd be curious to hear this performed by actors. is it a prologue to something, or to all poetry in general?
[n/a] Dovina @ 70.38.78.229 > nypoet22 | 24-Oct-06/11:11 AM | Reply
It is intro to my next great work. Stay tuned.
[8] drnick @ 24.176.22.254 | 23-Oct-06/2:58 PM | Reply
Hahaha, nice.
[8] howl @ 81.178.72.28 | 24-Oct-06/8:30 AM | Reply
Cool. Put in on your gravestone.
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