tadpole
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 10:38 AM
I can't tell you how much I like this poem. . .10
almost.8
hoochie coo. 8.
An excellent assemblage of words.
what the hell is with the short lines? its damned annoying to read it in that fashion- specially since i dont see its purpose, and its written in a fashion where jaggedness doesnt suit it.
my only complaint- blessed with 7.
Quite a tasty write. blessed with 8.
Thanks for the comments, appreciated.
want me to donate some sandals?
blessed with 7
Carmelites were MEN.. friars..
i dont think they had a nunnery.
this is too loaded with mush.. bleh. 2.
quite good, id say. blessed with 9.
joe, you need to learn of how to use language in a humorous manner- attention grabbing verses that incite chuckles..
now if you made this street scene less "sleepsville", its the kind of thing that gets me thinking:
jesus christ- cant i get a drive by shooting in this? an old mans pants leaking shit, a major car crash while these damned morons dance?
get what im saying?
This poem requires anal sex.
Y2kSlamPoet
on Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Oct 2003, 8:20 AM
There, isnt that much more lively?
Dat's berry chute.
You can only post three poems a week here and you post this. Holy Christ. I mean, you stole half the thing from rhymezone.com - prolly got the other half from dictionary.com.
At least come up with 3 more stanzas and make it a real poem.
well, it rhymes, so ...
I read the parody of this before I read the sourse. I do not mean to be mean, but I very much like the parody better. I get a flavor (not from you, I still have not been here long) that here is a lot of incest going on here at PoemRanker. There's a whole lot of screwing going on. Since you are able to inspire so much flattery. I give you a ten.
He accidentilly swallowed it two years ago on a bet that he was actually a robot. typo in the title, by the way.
hey don't worry KC. i am going through the 0s as well. though most of mine are blue. hehe you should read my poem Blue 0s are cowards. a little hard to read, but funny as hell. at least i think so. -10-
i love the rhymes. very good KC lllooovveee it!! yes i had too much cafine. hehehe = )
For lent this year I will be eating no lint.