SupremeDreamer
on The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus
29 Oct 2003, 5:08 PM
awesome, quite enjoyable.
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I would go with "Mr. Tiddles last breath" as a title.
My prophetic soul! Remember I was bitching about how dry lake Arrowhead was ('Lake Arrowhead' Oct 19th, 2003)?
Good capture. Even in LA it looks like the fucking apocalypse, I can't imagine being at the place where the heart of the fire would be (if it had one).
The true secret behind lesbians.
I'm afraid for talentless cretins who have to write things in lower case to satisfy themselves that their worthless poetry is profound enough.
[X] Arbitrary line breaks
[X] Shit
Excellent. Simply excellent. Hi, I'm -=Dark_Angel=-. I wonder if I could use this piece to help give feeling to a Stephen Hawking memorial Hallowe'en Extravaganza I'm throwing on Friday?
somebody call the waaaaaaaaaaaaaambulance.
Amazing. Simply amazing. Hi, I'm -=Dark_Angel=-. This poem really speaks to me -- and I'm not just saying that!!1 How did you come up with the idea for this piece? I'm especially intrigued as to the meaning of the unconventional spelling of "friendships" in the title -- What are you saying here? That your friendships don't quite fit the conventional, mainstream definition? Excellent work -- 10!
Tiddles breathes his last
and then pass-
es out
Cute poem everything a haiku should be I think
That man is the dandiest rosey cheeked little poppit i've ever seen. Are there any plans to market him as an action figure?
He's simply splendid.
Soreass did you really meet him?
If so how come you didn't start a beautiful relationship with him??? Men like that come along but once a lifetime girlfriend!
If you haven't guessed yet, I was looking for me as a child. I was then entering the reality I had became an adult. Thanks everyone. Comment Please!
This is truly beautiful.
Wonderful. I was sincerely moved.
The Wind... It has so much to teach us.
Is this a satirical reply to a critisism of a parody of your own parody? Do not reply "no", I know it is. Even a mentally-handicapped cripled dwarf with no arms could do better than this.
I think you are wrong. Freindshpis never die!!!!1