Lyric № 72432

As It Is

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Oct 2003 · 3 comments

Counting down the days âTill I could bust the doors open Now it is time to play Than to do a single chore (Bridge) Itâs not that were even bad Nor ever that I was sad But Iâm going for something Something elseâ¦ (Chorus) Iâm a simple defiance Not to gain the world I need independence To have another turn Cause I am just a kid Whoâs waiting for fun So leave my life as it is Then I could be someone No more cheaply allowance Hello brand new car Hated curfew after dark As now I can get very far (Bridge) (Chorus) Finally getting out today Never been so glad Finding a new way Cause Iâm never coming back All you have are memories Of the many years with me I step into reality Hoping to make you see (Chorus/End)

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[5] Shuushin 29-Oct-03/6:02 AM Reply

I think it could be something, but it needs a hook, my friend - needs a hook.

and that first line in the bridge - maybe a missing word in there; give it a read.

lastly - the bridge was a bit soon for me. Maybe develop the hookline in that second bit and move the bridge down - just as a suggestion.

[6] newdawnfades 29-Oct-03/9:44 AM Reply

Doesn't quite flow as smoothly as it could. It could be better.

[2] Bachus 29-Oct-03/3:09 PM Reply

Is it Jiz?