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As It Is (Lyric) by Miggy

Counting down the days ‘Till I could bust the doors open Now it is time to play Than to do a single chore (Bridge) It’s not that were even bad Nor ever that I was sad But I’m going for something Something else… (Chorus) I’m a simple defiance Not to gain the world I need independence To have another turn Cause I am just a kid Who’s waiting for fun So leave my life as it is Then I could be someone No more cheaply allowance Hello brand new car Hated curfew after dark As now I can get very far (Bridge) (Chorus) Finally getting out today Never been so glad Finding a new way Cause I’m never coming back All you have are memories Of the many years with me I step into reality Hoping to make you see (Chorus/End)

newdawnfades 29-Oct-03/9:44 AM
Doesn't quite flow as smoothly as it could. It could be better.




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