March is "unbalanced by nature" as poets and weathermen say and as this poem says well. So why do you feel "stupid" inthe end?

If this is true, then I am a dead, cynical lamb.I have never allowed myself to be lead anywhere by anything but the pleasure of disobedience. Or is that what you actually meant?

Both you ans T.S. have it right. Kudos.

Here's another red bar - probably old news. (http://www.alwaysontherun.net/kendra.htm#e)

I've always been found of self abhoration.

lolin all da way 2 da bank! nobut seriizly gud job :P) -10-

"The Pederast" more like LOLTTM WTF?

>>>>GOOGLE CLICHE COUNT<<<< I don’t even know your name (3,900,000!!!) But that mystery only deepens my intrigue. (25) I would like to say that I am content, Just to know that you exist. (126) Life is full of (88,700) sadness (70) and empty of remorse, (11) It gives and takes indiscriminately. (369) But every so often it smiles upon us, (52) And in that radiant glow (239), we are found fortunate. It is enough for me to (2,410) bask in the (62) light of your smile, (807) And drown in the depths of your eyes. (depths: 346, eyes: 531) >>>>GOOGLE CLICHE TOTAL: 3,993,748<<<<

Yawn. Thanks for the 1994 flashback, though.

Pardon me while I ass yawn with you.

Being mature is a bad thing. Immaturity is much more fun, so you're wrong.

Good, lots of ideas, insights. A bit fragmented though, you go from a bar to a marshland and then seem to list a number of neighbourhood held truisms.

Quite like your story based poems, they read well. A bit surprised to read about Zulus being weed smokers.

If these people were idiots, why do you care?

Of the poems you recently submitted, I like this best, especially the last few lines. Like the others, I think it's too wordy, too cliched, but good Omit "untold."

So few listeners! When I finally find one I go "wordlessand wild." I like it.

This could be a Reader's Digest "Drama in Real Life." -10-

Thanks for rambling on.Interesting, though.

Nice poem.

Funny poem. I really like it.