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Too much rain (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
"You're the kind of gal I could get drunk with," I said.
Then she took another sip and put down her cup
And looked at the bartender as if enough is enough.
Then I was running
Through waist-high weeds.
Feeling my boots sinking
As I traveled through the marshes
That circled your house and
Stuck to my shoes.
The stars hung high and the moon hung low.
There was nothing in the lamplight that said
No one's home.
Breathing hard, I convinced myself
That fire being fire,
Earth being earth,
There's some things sure like how
Phillip's dirt always breeds
The best cabbages and
No one knows better bout
Playing cards than Mr. Mitchell--
The one with the two scars.
Nothing but a woman and a man.
"Maybe so," she said
Then she turned and left,
Leaving me there alone with a glass full of whiskey.
There's some things sure like
The river running high
Leaving marshes flooded and
Leaving the higher roads dry.
With only one way,
I'll have cleaner shoes.
But there's something nice about
Swimming against the tide,
Being swept back,
Trying to sink in and stick in all the flooded places
That have known too much rain.
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Posted: March 18, 2004 8:31 PM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2004 8:31 PM PST
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