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Buried pyramid (Free verse) by zodiac
(Cholula,)
There was a band, some Mariachi
outfit in a roasting bar; we danced till I caught a
bad beat and puked in a box of Dos Equis bottles
in the parking lot. She
was dancing, Adibe, when I came back,
a drink held up over her head, and this crotchy
Catholic-girl swing she had, so watching
her you knew how sheâd be with her black
tight slacks off and the windows pulling
tropic early-morning damp in the room and her neck
bent to kiss like a horse drinking, a sharp peak
of shoulder-blades - hair falling
around her brown Naco face. Itâd
smell like old smoke, puke, tile after a squall in
the afternoon; like night swollen
with rain, shit-drunk, heavy-lidded
and utterly fuckall. Then she was dancing with Oscar, who told
her the night-guardia at the church-topped pyramid 'd
sell us hash. Not that we wanted it, but we headed
up empty Camino Real in the cold
waking-up dark, under streetlamps that rendered us
in ones and twos. And Adibe rolled
sleepily against me like a cat - and Oscar as well -
sang softly,
- amor,
por ti bebÃ
mi propio llanto...
and mixed up the verses; and a drunk old
sadness made the night airless and splendorous,
made a game of not falling in the swell-
and-dip of the big dew-slick cobbles, till the wondrous
seriousness of keeping our feet under us
left us, and we fell.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.5
Weighted score: 6.2102365
Overall Rank: 972
Posted: March 16, 2004 7:33 PM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2004 10:43 AM PST
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It's good prose Zodiac - what's the translation?
for you I drank
my own sob/cry/scream...
- from 'Revancha' by Agustin Lara (the hispanic Bing Crosby)