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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
Read with caution!
Unadorned (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
Where do I begin and end in space She wondered as she flew into the night And heard it calling her name in the country I was with her then Once again she heard the silent voice telling her to stop you're going to far Nonetheless she felt no concious fear Breathing soft to God as in the instant of release. Under a wide and starry sky dig me a grave and let me die. Where do I begin and end in space when you've seen her face you can believe in natural law Hiding in every place she'll tell you why the sky is blue. Down to the sea she is singing and no man on earth can be hid from her dreaming.

Up the ladder: tunnel boy
Down the ladder: An Anthem for Peace

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5555556
Weighted score: 3.7777777
Overall Rank: 13501
Posted: October 20, 2002 10:33 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 10:33 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.210.49 | 21-Oct-02/8:52 AM | Reply
Silent voices cannot be heard. I couldn't read any further after that.
[n/a] Frass @ 66.160.116.193 > god'swife | 21-Oct-02/1:33 PM | Reply
I like some of this poem--makes me want to reread it; and, GW, if you'd stuck with it, she mentions your husband.
[2] Tintagiles @ 207.179.137.231 | 21-Oct-02/9:52 AM | Reply
Hee hee, silent voices... That's even funnier than my bird with lips.
[0] zodiac @ 67.240.211.24 | 18-Mar-04/8:05 PM | Reply
Here's another red bar - probably old news. (http://www.alwaysontherun.net/kendra.htm#e)
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