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An Anthem for Peace (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom Say no to war,
Say yes to peace,
Say no to revenge,
Say yes to reconciliation,
Say no to hate,
Say yes to love,
Say no to death,
Aye------- say yes to life.
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Posted: January 21, 2003 10:23 AM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2003 10:23 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.7777777 Overall Rank: 13502 Comments:
Check : vulgar peoples.
Oh, and pray hard.
There may only be a few days left before it begins. These things need to be said. But poetically this isn't one of your best.
Yig! I say, Sure you got a message but your just saying it with no style, no flare, no room for any intereptation. Try giving a little effort at being poetic.
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Have you ever looked into a mirror--------godawful----huh!
Love,
Doug