being an engineer, its always a pleasure to come across boolean algebra. unusual poem 10

Sorry, but the way you have this structured makes it hard to read....

I forgot who sharon tate was. Don't make me google. Sounds good anyway though.

I wish I'd used 'chronic' for the rhyme instead of 'Hashanah' -- or, alternately, 'marijuana', 'Madonna' or 'Hosannah!' instead of 'colonic'. I just feel like it's a letdown after the great opening rhyme of 'being one' and 'penguin'. Which do rhyme down here, incidentally.

this reminds me of this guy that's always looking at me..its kind of creepy.. but like.. he's kinda cute.. so maybe i should talk to him, i dont want him to feel stupid.

A cute story, light and a bit humorous. That's probably an insult, but I'm more than a bit older.

like..woa..

...until you get raped in the middle of the night

i think it should just be called "leaves"

i cant tell if u have a hangover or are experiencing side effects from radiation therapy..

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Yep, I hate'em too.

damn yo

i had a sheep once. it was a dumbass.

holy crap, that has to be one of the longest poems ive ever read....

Yuppy, or hippy? Got my attention, gimme more you commie bastard. Oh, crap - did I say that out loud?

You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.

Waiting for part 2

loved it..

"halting my whole world" ???