sheep is as sheep does. not baaaa-ahd.

Hmmm. Strong methinks - strong. and "have" should be "have" - you knew that, right?

This poeme doesn't make sense. You fail.

From this a poem you shall make. this is very good: "Under the white sheets your heat dripped onto mine and it wasn’t the first time our bodily fluids combined But it was the last time I wanted you near me"

I like this one quite a bit - can you loose the word "quest" though - maybe "exercise" instead?? (its actually possible you could loose the entire stanza...)

okay. I like it.

A good picture of ocean waves. But I don't see how "If you are what you are said to be" leads to the last two lines.

"What once was the tale" "empty gap" All gaps are empty. "To protect a softened heart, walls were built" I like the first verse. Some of the rhymes are forced. Some of the lines are wordy.

I like this one a lot, somewhereman.

Well the waves are a garented rise and fall right?BUT this poem it about how someone says that they are great and can rise above but they are questioned becuase How can they if there scared of hight? get it now?

I was off-put in the very first line because I have never "imagined from every angle in my mind." It's a bit much. But as you move along, it's quite sweet, and I'm quite jealous.

hey aliena, good descriptors - now you just need to say something with them.

too "listy" - yes, I made that word up. Gimme so flow, gimme some "poetry".

2nd person... very difficult to pull off; I had trouble "feeling" this. "Altophobia" - lowercase?

Sad, but - thankfully - short (this kind of thing can get old quickly)

yep. that works.

Four spelling errors. Is the ending counter-intuitive, or am I missing something?

"sorority" Sure, I get it.

this made me smile..

ah ha.