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Mariana (Free verse) by wilco
She bleeds life like a sieve
Only slightly crazy,
But most assuredly insane.
Entrancing with her movement,
Given to the moment
And taken like a wasted breath.
She laughs like the ocean moves,
Breaking on the shoreline
And giving in to the incessant call.
A tiny bit of honeysuckle rose
Floating past the farmhouse
In the warm southern twilight.
Lying between the blades of grass,
Without a sound
And breaking apart the heavens.
She grasps at the seams of her dress
Glowing in the fields
And dancing with a shadows grace.
Sheâs a little piece of moonlight
Riding the nighttime
And playing in the atmosphere.
A narrow light contrasting the dark
Smiling in a knowing way
And dodging the darkness between fireflies
She came, rushing like a cannonball
Without regard for simple things
And fading faster than I had hoped
Leaning slowly closer to my ear,
Whispering caustic words of love
And saving me from myself.
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Weighted score: 6.878635
Overall Rank: 271
Posted: February 20, 2004 10:58 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2004 6:31 PM PST
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