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I Have A Love (Other) by Spindle I have a love.
This moment has been imagined from every angle in my mind.
I saw him in every colour, every shape, every place, every kind.
And now heâs here and heâs like nothing I could have guessed.
His hair is shorter, as is his stature, even the way heâs dressed.
He doesnât rescue me from pirates
Or whisk me off to the coast.
He doesnât shower me with presents
Or read me poetry he wrote.
But he does tickle me until I canât breathe
And he makes sure Iâm ok
When I think about I canât believe
But itâs so much better this way
I have a love
And he loves me
I have a love
And so much more
I have a love
And heâs not perfect
But neither am I, for sure
So Iâll take my love and my darling
(Though heâd kill me if he heard that title was his role)
And close my eyes to the small quarreling
And instead open my heart to his soul
Up the ladder:
Loneliness
Down the ladder:
Lost In Her Effervescence
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Posted: March 31, 2004 6:27 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2004 6:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.4994626 Overall Rank: 2738 Comments:
its cute
I enjoyed it immensely
I was off-put in the very first line because I have never "imagined from every angle in my mind." It's a bit much. But as you move along, it's quite sweet, and I'm quite jealous.
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Actually a little twist there in the second to last line. Sounds (the situation) so wonderful but then there is this little shadow of doubt (the quarreling).
Would be nice to exploit this more. Something like "He's so thoughtful and kind and everything is so wonderful except for the way he stares at my sister's ass when he thinks I don't see" kindof thing.