Free verse № 72806
Love Poem
Iâll paint a line along your chest with my tongue
Like a trail of acid.
Watch the skin rust and corrode,
Watch it melt away and let the blood seep through.
Red, glossy, so purely and beautifully you,
And so warm to the touch.
The taste makes me drunk
Like warm whiskey and lemon.
The smell is warm too,
Just like home, fireplace and all.
As the blood pools Iâll bathe my hands wrist deep
Like a coat of dark, bitter chocolate.
Iâll run my hands over my skin like an artist
And paint your warmth into mine.
When Iâve saved the courage, Iâll sink my fingers into you,
Grip the jagged edges of skin
So I can tear open the curtain of flesh between us
To put my hands inside,
And know how you really feel.
Gliding my hands over muscle and bone,
I can feel your lungs filling
Deep and fast.
Iâll move closer to put my ear over your heart,
My face, all my skin smeared and dripping red.
That way I can hear your heart beat loud and clear until it slows and stops
As you bleed out completely for me,
Your heart bared, and I on the inside.
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As it sits, it's quite memorable - but I think with some pruning (sorry for the cliche, but more showing instead of telling), and a stronger sense of Structure this thing would be exceptionally powerful.
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