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Haiku № 95718

Color me Lifeless

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

I cannot go on, When forgetting you is like, Halting my whole world. You deny me this, And my seasons will not change, And life will grow cold

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[8] Shuushin 1-Apr-04/6:05 PM Reply
Sad, but - thankfully - short (this kind of thing can get old quickly)
[6] aliena 1-Apr-04/11:44 PM Reply
"halting my whole world" ???