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Color me Lifeless (Haiku) by alverland theme park I cannot go on,
When forgetting you is like,
Halting my whole world.
You deny me this,
And my seasons will not change,
And life will grow cold
Up the ladder:
Emotion Dawns
Down the ladder:
eat what you want.
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Posted: April 1, 2004 1:54 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 1:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.75 Overall Rank: 1812 Comments:
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Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177
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1-Apr-04/6:05 PM
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Sad, but - thankfully - short (this kind of thing can get old quickly)
"halting my whole world" ???
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