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Jesus-f-ingChrist I'm Sober (Free verse) by embersandenvelopes
So it's almost 5 and somewhere in Baltmore minus a few years Tori sings. I'm here mumbling about how I'd like to shit on religion if I wasn't worried about the possibility of Hell in my final second. Well, so I've screwed that up, too, but the Ark was just a story written to keep all of us sheep as sheep. Baa-ahhh. Where's my drink?

Up the ladder: For China

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1935
Posted: April 1, 2004 1:46 AM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 1:46 AM PST
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[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 1-Apr-04/2:40 AM | Reply
An accident involving your bum and a gay man's knob.
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 1-Apr-04/7:33 AM | Reply
Why do you feel the need to censor your own use of the word 'fucking'? Are you so ground down by the repressive culture of your country you can't even bear to type it out properly?
[n/a] embersandenvelopes @ 24.152.203.178 > Nicholas Jones | 5-Apr-04/12:26 AM | Reply
If you noticed, I didn't sensor the word "shit". Maybe it has less to do with my repressive culture and more to do with making a point you didn't grasp? Perhaps this is due to you focusing too much on repressive cultures and less on the words between words.
[8] richa @ 81.178.243.245 | 1-Apr-04/8:05 AM | Reply
Like how you got from sheep to where's my drink in one easy step.
[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 1-Apr-04/3:31 PM | Reply
sheep is as sheep does. not baaaa-ahd.
[9] New Life Drug @ 67.112.121.237 | 1-Apr-04/7:03 PM | Reply
damn yo
[9] New Life Drug @ 67.112.121.237 | 1-Apr-04/7:04 PM | Reply
i had a sheep once. it was a dumbass.
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