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PEOPLE. (Debut) (Free verse) by Doc
The young man makes mistakes, but he does try.
You don't listen,
Yet you still demand to know why.
You called ahead, and so did I.
Polite and mannered when amongst you're kind.
We must be different.
While I wait silently, you speak you're mind.
No one's fault you're table isn't clean,
You don't see me making a scene.
So shut up you FUCKING YUPPY.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.336177
Overall Rank: 3460
Posted: April 1, 2004 6:54 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 6:54 PM PST
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