| Re: a comment on Duck - an ode by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/7:54 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Duck - an ode by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/7:54 PM |
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| Re: A Panglossian Farmer by richa |
5-Feb-04/5:04 PM |
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| Re: Necromancers Song (Incubus Guitar & Buddhist Drums) by SupremeDreamer |
5-Feb-04/5:03 PM |
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also, you, I have a mission for you young one, e mail me at horus8j@yahoo.com
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| Re: Duck - an ode by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/4:59 PM |
I'm sorry, but this hilarious, and really weird in a sort of a surreal dramatic way? huh... well, you certainly surprised me, I was wondering, I'm starting a publishing company, and I'd be interested in publishing your work, please e mail me for further information. horus8j@yahoo.com
Thankyou.
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| Re: a comment on Emily Mae by horus8 |
5-Feb-04/11:23 AM |
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I have Strunk and White, pink dot, and all the time in the world my dear friend. Thank you for the -edit- you're so Ace. "Bathetic" Yes, lol, but I've seen worse shit go down.
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| Re: Our visions by penguin fiend |
29-Jan-04/7:09 PM |
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Your poems are about homosexual jews licking the chrome off of America.
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| Re: What Was An Attempt Is Now Gone by Blindpoetry |
29-Jan-04/6:58 PM |
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This is actually a better poem than your non-pimple poems. How'd you do that?
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| Re: Our visions by penguin fiend |
29-Jan-04/6:57 PM |
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| Re: bimby by sneakerpimp |
21-Jan-04/1:47 PM |
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It is most unkind of you to make me reach that far from my pot to find my teeth. Therefore, pack your things, you're fired from poetry. You are aware that your poem would have been much better if you'd have only repeated the word "Bermph" outloud indefinately.
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| Re: Forgive and regret by penguin fiend |
20-Jan-04/7:56 PM |
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Now that was about as stimulating as watching a caterpillar take a shit on a leaf, but with less leaf and more...
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| Re: a comment on Scarlet Wyvern by SupremeDreamer |
20-Jan-04/7:38 PM |
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| Re: The Cookies by Blindpoetry |
20-Jan-04/7:37 PM |
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By the third stanza, I wanted to go back to the first one, and stay there. 4
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| Re: Last love poem by penguin fiend |
20-Jan-04/7:36 PM |
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You've been writing for awhile, and this is what you've arrived at?
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| Re: Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap |
11-Jan-04/3:29 PM |
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| Re: a comment on A dream of a fruit-gun by zodiac |
11-Jan-04/3:28 PM |
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I like it. it's actually well written. Maybe, I'm jealous?
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| Re: a comment on Da Ghetto by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-Jan-04/3:24 PM |
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Absolutely, I actually have been enjoying your work today. I was just giving you 6's because I thought you were my mom. Long story... don't ask.
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| Re: Wasted Nation by DMonster |
11-Jan-04/2:28 PM |
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lol, this is a rearing angry crack pipe in the face of crack!...?
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| Re: A dream of a fruit-gun by zodiac |
11-Jan-04/2:24 PM |
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Let me guess? this is in 'other' because your poetry is daring! Your fruit gun metaphor for a cock sandwich with a side of date rape brisque was riveting.
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| Re: i would have you by silvertongueddevil |
11-Jan-04/12:32 PM |
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