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A Panglossian Farmer (Other) by richa
The farmer to his farmhands, perched upon the stone walls of a lonely existence, would sometimes tell stories; the unfairness of winter, how his daughter had fallen on ice and spent the week in plaster. ' I did not turn to crack, or criminality, or fraud' he would say. The farmhands raised a glass to the sentiment.

Up the ladder: She washed over me
Down the ladder: Jailbird

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 6.0757656
Overall Rank: 1168
Posted: February 5, 2004 9:20 AM PST; Last modified: February 5, 2004 9:20 AM PST
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[n/a] richa @ 81.178.230.13 | 5-Feb-04/9:20 AM | Reply
Other - because it is more a sketch than a poem
[9] andrewjthomas @ 192.150.10.200 | 5-Feb-04/9:48 AM | Reply
nice sketch
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 5-Feb-04/12:57 PM | Reply
You certainly win the prize for the week's most aribtrary line break. The prize is six of the best followed by a trip to Matron's office.
[8] NanceXToo @ 24.229.216.168 | 5-Feb-04/2:20 PM | Reply
Nice. I like this one.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 5-Feb-04/5:04 PM | Reply
you are funny.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 5-Feb-04/9:24 PM | Reply
paints an interesting picture; fresh.

walls? plural? why?

I like the "week in plaster" but it pulls me from a simpler time; smacks of technology - maybe a splint?
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