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What Was An Attempt Is Now Gone (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
I touched her heart; it was cold
Colder than the night before
I say âDo you need me to warm it?â
She says nothing; she just shook her head
From the tears of sadness
Her heart was cold as ice
She was locked in a chamber
The warlock caught her
I try to warm it
With my oblivious heart
But I could not go near it
The ice sickles are to sharp
I broke into the chambers
But I was caught by the warlock
The trail of bread crumbs gave me away
Nothing seems to workâ¦
I hear you on the radio
Youâre singing about your love life
You insult me in your questions
You think Iâm not listening
Now I tune you out
I grab a hammer
And I crack it; I smash it
I broke it; now I leave it be
But you paste it back together
You fix it with much expertise
Youâve done this many times before
You fix them for a living
But now its time to fire you
You can do the job
You can fix it with just duct tape
But you give no heart into it
You went to school for game development
But radios suited you better
But you learned enough to know how the game is truly created
Then why do you play it so wrong?
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.142857
Weighted score: 5.03842
Overall Rank: 7204
Posted: January 29, 2004 6:17 PM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2004 6:17 PM PST
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