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Our visions (Free verse) by penguin fiend
If you saw the real side of me Tell me what would you see Would it be the one you long to touch Or would you just think I'm nothing much If I saw past your mind Tell me what would I find Would I find a world full of joy Or would I just see a stupid little boy Could we just see past it all Because there was a time I can recall When we didn't have any of these feelings Because of you, my life has meaning

Up the ladder: Oh
Down the ladder: Rub You Out

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8960
Posted: January 29, 2004 6:24 PM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2004 6:24 PM PST
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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 29-Jan-04/6:57 PM | Reply
No.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 29-Jan-04/7:09 PM | Reply
Your poems are about homosexual jews licking the chrome off of America.
[n/a] penguin fiend @ 216.207.134.245 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 30-Jan-04/5:53 PM | Reply
No, I'm sorry, I wouldn't waste my time writing poems about you
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