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Our visions (Free verse) by penguin fiend

If you saw the real side of me Tell me what would you see Would it be the one you long to touch Or would you just think I'm nothing much If I saw past your mind Tell me what would I find Would I find a world full of joy Or would I just see a stupid little boy Could we just see past it all Because there was a time I can recall When we didn't have any of these feelings Because of you, my life has meaning

<{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Jan-04/7:09 PM
Your poems are about homosexual jews licking the chrome off of America.




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