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Forgive and regret (Free verse) by penguin fiend I came back to you
I forgave, now I regret
You're in my mind again
Is this the thanks I get
My spirit has been destroied
And my will is shattered
When I see how you left me
In the blackness of my soul, bleeding and battered
You have no mercy
For the soul in your fist
When you thought you understood me
You totally missed
My smile is roting scars
My eyes hide the sorrow
They hide the rusted tears
Because they know they will see you tomorrow
I am just another stich
On your quilt of human hearts
Once this day is done
My fear will tear me apart
Up the ladder:
Flown
Down the ladder:
The Worst First
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Posted: January 19, 2004 6:11 PM PST; Last modified: January 19, 2004 6:11 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8973 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54
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20-Jan-04/7:56 PM
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Now that was about as stimulating as watching a caterpillar take a shit on a leaf, but with less leaf and more...
"You can ask me to punish you with turds, you can ask me strike you into the ground with my cane, you can ask me to slaughter your children with an axe, you can ask me have your name slandered at the bi-monthly Cheesesmith's Convention, you can ask me withdraw your trouser allowance, and you can ask me to ride you into towne like a donkey. You can even ask me to return you to the dung-heap I found you on. But there is one thing you cannot ask of me; one thing that is beyond all my powers as a Gentleman to endure...
You cannot ask me to forgive you. For that is something no man can do." Earl Proud-Stocking XV to his butler, upon catching the feeble manservant parading around the Bedchamber in his Master's Jodhpurs. 168 view(s)
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