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Last love poem (Free verse) by penguin fiend I love you but nothng can't hide
The tears that come from my invisible eyes
I know you can't see my pain
Beause your heart screams my name
Love makes us all wonder blindly
Only after blindness can we truely see
Why the feelings we have exist
Gentle as a morning mist
Come with me, no regrets
When I'm with you I never forget
My reason for living
Because your heart is so giving
Up the ladder:
From Dust To Flesh To Texas
Down the ladder:
The life of a clerk
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Posted: January 20, 2004 6:18 PM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2004 6:18 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5293 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54
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20-Jan-04/7:36 PM
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You've been writing for awhile, and this is what you've arrived at?
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penguin fiend @ 216.207.132.30
> <{Baba^Yaga}>
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21-Jan-04/3:53 PM
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Learn to read douche bag, it says haven't been writing for awhile
This is great....i dont use punctuation...capitols, proper use of speech... or grammar either and everyone seems to hate me for it....and to me your stuff is great and i understand it...so keep doing it the way YOU like it theres no problem with it and everyone that has a problem with mis use of words and punctuatin should just kiss our no exclamation asses
Agree??
totally
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