| Re: a comment on I am Cuba by cacophony |
23-Dec-02/4:26 PM |
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of course he's right, haven't you heard. he's christof.
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| Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/4:18 PM |
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not to mention a bad case of writers block. your days as a fantastic poet are coming to an tragic end. i feel you have peaked. unfortunate. tsk.
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| Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/4:15 PM |
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oh, yeah almost forgot. here's your three back.
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| Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/4:07 PM |
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sounds like tying one on, and sleepin on the porch again to me.
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| Re: The Morris Minor Rap by rosiebailey |
23-Dec-02/2:08 PM |
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see. i knew i ripped some sad bastard off. cheers. the wicky is sacred and since you agree. 9. also meeps are very tasteful too.
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| Re: I am Cuba by cacophony |
23-Dec-02/2:06 PM |
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i still think clock should be cock.
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| Re: The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird |
23-Dec-02/2:05 PM |
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perfect. except for the fact that you wrote it of course.
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| Re: The Funnyman by Christof |
23-Dec-02/2:03 PM |
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you know what's funny about the best list here at poemranker? the way it shifts ever so predictably. i wasn't thinking stan boardman (whoever on god's green earth would? except for you of course) at all more like a jerry louis marathon, but without the muscular ailment, just more ale.
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| Re: a comment on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Dec-02/1:00 PM |
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thank god. then he wouldn't exist..bernies lyrics are great, and the missing link.
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| Re: a comment on The Fucking Fives by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Dec-02/12:56 PM |
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not complicated i've read to many poems here a couple thousand? nah?yeah. that's alot of fives. lol. also i wanted to see if like attract's like (how many fives this'll get) bachus once told me he was amazed to find out how many people wanted to read about fucking cousins and babysitters..i thought interesting. very very interesting the way our minds work.
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| Re: a comment on Before The Sun by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Dec-02/12:51 PM |
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friction in the earth creates mountains where wonderful things live and grow. you'll be a mountain yet.
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| Re: a comment on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Dec-02/12:46 PM |
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i counted, there would be 14 large islands left over (being the tops of certain mountains. lets name them?
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| Re: I have no Idea?...? by brazen |
22-Dec-02/11:16 PM |
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this is tight now.don't change it anymore, you are finding honesty and humor much more at your disposal i see. good, that's an unarguable foundation. now comes title strengthening with a high octane dose of subject upon style relation improvement. your gonna peak within the next year, and when you do. you'll laugh with me about the nines. i enjoy your work, and it makes me feel very good in more ways than i bet you'd believe that you trust me. a poets death is earned and remembered his/her birth, an accident divine.'
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| Re: battle within, graceful losing by brazen |
22-Dec-02/11:05 PM |
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merry christmas. your poetry is getting stronger.the poets life, his calling, is to the 'struggle', to the 'word'. god was a poet, and we are all god through that gift. the gift of communication for a better sense of what it means to be 'here'. you were born a poet. we all were.H
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| Re: Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz |
22-Dec-02/3:48 PM |
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"contented" really? what are you now, contenting?
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| Re: Opera by ~incarnate~ |
22-Dec-02/2:57 PM |
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i love operas big time, but this is a free verse, not a haiku, but close (not really)..since i liked the topic i'll push you 'over five' and call it six.
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| Re: Reason for being late by Normo |
22-Dec-02/2:54 PM |
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| Re: Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain |
22-Dec-02/1:31 PM |
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you ever notice people with no sense of humor aren't <funny> it's caused by a recessive gene due to inbreeding and academia injected 'idealations', the style you're mimicking is a 'code' invented to teach the reader using a mode of symbolic regurgitations inspired by a thought than a notion into idea into written word thus spoken 'it' becomes. exists..for a single but 'every day' purpose, being the dot to dotting, the layering,the connecting of filaments, tissue, elements.. to be assembled than named 'the great bringing', so by using ones senses, both mentally and physically <spiritually fueled with curiosities, insatiable> you correspond symbols with the names at a rate uncalculable and secret <the formula that god used to bring things into being> biochemical process that the mind uses to decide. But [since] you choose not decide on anything other than your 'sad' attempt at criticizing against the value of this particular 'style'. ironically by taking the time to write about it at all only strengthens its validity, so thanks for helping me decide on just how i feel about your attempt. <i don't>.
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| Re: a comment on First move by aliena |
22-Dec-02/12:37 PM |
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boy! you're sharp. there are only two ways parallel tracks can move together, or appart...but wai..what's this? it's 'towards'.
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| Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
19-Dec-02/8:35 PM |
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i'll drink some skaldic brew to that.the titles kind of pauly shore, but the piece is impeccable..
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