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battle within, graceful losing (Free verse) by brazen
desperate days call out
spreading words across the wind
never listened to them
never could understand
how to live life like a man.
caught a few stray echoes
took the credit as my own
never filled the chasm
never could stand strong
now i am some other man.
step back from yourself
listen to the ticking time
never saw that inside me
never could be everything
now i am a shadow of a man.
gently gliding through memories
sweet oil with bitter vinegar
never found a medium ground
never could survive between
now i am lost inside a man.
desperate measures call in favors
plunged into the valley of my mind
never listened to the inside
never could understand
how to take the life of a man.
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Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8549
Posted: December 22, 2002 10:47 PM PST; Last modified: February 13, 2003 9:20 AM PST
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