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Opera (Free verse) by ~incarnate~ Rise of passion and of voice,
blending breath to produce sounds
that transcend simplicity
Up the ladder:
why do i still love you
Down the ladder:
My Brother's Demons
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Posted: October 23, 2002 5:55 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2003 12:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12344 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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22-Dec-02/2:57 PM
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i love operas big time, but this is a free verse, not a haiku, but close (not really)..since i liked the topic i'll push you 'over five' and call it six.
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7 7 too bad its not a slot machine.
Yes, between sexy and simple there lies a fine line. Yet this peice may not cut the mustard. C for effort.
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