on I Didn't Know by Bonehiss
13 Jan 2003, 3:22 PM
yeah. that's what they all say. next.
on Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer
13 Jan 2003, 3:21 PM
settle.
on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
13 Jan 2003, 3:20 PM
pure piranha.
on Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss
13 Jan 2003, 3:19 PM
you're obviously stupid, and have never been high a day in your life. Tell me how can you see ghosts when you've never seen life. idiot.
on Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w
13 Jan 2003, 3:17 PM
no. to find your wooden shoes a haven for tasteless termites.
on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
13 Jan 2003, 3:12 PM
shit, or get off the pot. yeah that's complex.
on RAP MASTER by UAFANTHORPEY
13 Jan 2003, 3:09 PM
totally fucking brilliant. "You get "THE HUT" with penguine feet for proper shuffling. you need a turntable solo though <inbetween> {with a chicky, a wicky, a booger flicky.chik chik chaw chik chaw chicky chaw.a chicky, a wicky, a booger flicky.chik chik chaw chik chaw chicky chaw.
on Untitled by Carvaceous
13 Jan 2003, 2:37 PM
lose the "i cringe", so that we can. get it? otherwise, loveley
on **The Therapist** by scitz
13 Jan 2003, 1:40 PM
i'd lose the last line completely.
on haiku 1 by Crakyamuni
13 Jan 2003, 1:28 PM
euphonious
on Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man
13 Jan 2003, 1:23 PM
What? and leave all of these fine suitors behind?
on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
10 Jan 2003, 8:03 PM
superb..you've won an ostrich legged hut.. and a life time supply of wigs and lipstick...God's wife is a ' serious' poet...not a weed eater.
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
on profile of an abuser by inka
10 Jan 2003, 7:04 PM
a drastic improvement. what part of michigan are you from..Troy. Southfield.Birmingkam, perhaps Saginaw? you're fired. have an 8
on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:54 PM
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)
on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:53 PM
"the powdered clounds are falling" i'm sorry, but you are smoking hard core crack, put the pipe down..take a minute before the powdery clounds come and carry you away.
on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:51 PM
the title alone..gets a ten. lol.