Re: I Didn't Know by Bonehiss	13-Jan-03/3:22 PM
yeah. that's what they all say. next.
Re: Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer	13-Jan-03/3:21 PM
settle.
Re: Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	13-Jan-03/3:20 PM
pure piranha.
Re: Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss	13-Jan-03/3:19 PM
you're obviously stupid, and have never been high a day in your life. Tell me how can you see ghosts when you've never seen life. idiot.
Re: Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w	13-Jan-03/3:17 PM
no. to find your wooden shoes a haven for tasteless termites.
Re: Retreived by T'ien	13-Jan-03/3:15 PM
jesus. "timless"? no. listless.limp.vague.weak.shit.shit.shit. here a 10. you obviously need a hug and more sugar on your raisen bran. fuck. i'm going to the random area. where the real poets once dwelt.
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	13-Jan-03/3:12 PM
shit, or get off the pot. yeah that's complex.
Re: RAP MASTER by UAFANTHORPEY	13-Jan-03/3:09 PM
totally fucking brilliant. "You get "THE HUT" with penguine feet for proper shuffling. you need a turntable solo though <inbetween> {with a chicky, a wicky, a booger flicky.chik chik chaw chik chaw chicky chaw.a chicky, a wicky, a booger flicky.chik chik chaw chik chaw chicky chaw.
Re: Untitled by Carvaceous	13-Jan-03/2:37 PM
lose the "i cringe", so that we can. get it? otherwise, loveley
Re: **The Therapist** by scitz	13-Jan-03/1:40 PM
i'd lose the last line completely.
Re: haiku 1 by Crakyamuni	13-Jan-03/1:28 PM
euphonious
Re: Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man	13-Jan-03/1:23 PM
What? and leave all of these fine suitors behind?
Re: Lucky by debased	10-Jan-03/8:05 PM
Jesus?! here's what it leads too. sell out. http://gangbox.com/mp3/stagnantlove.mp3
Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub	10-Jan-03/8:03 PM
superb..you've won an ostrich legged hut.. and a life time supply of wigs and lipstick...God's wife is a ' serious' poet...not a weed eater.
Re: fade in by inka	10-Jan-03/7:48 PM
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry i couldn't resist. http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
Re: profile of an abuser by inka	10-Jan-03/7:04 PM
a drastic improvement. what part of michigan are you from..Troy. Southfield.Birmingkam, perhaps Saginaw? you're fired. have an 8
Re: blind by inka	10-Jan-03/7:00 PM
are you trying to steal my gauze?
Re: crack of light by inka	10-Jan-03/6:54 PM
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)
Re: crack of light by inka	10-Jan-03/6:53 PM
"the powdered clounds are falling" i'm sorry, but you are smoking hard core crack, put the pipe down..take a minute before the powdery clounds come and carry you away.
Re: crack of light by inka	10-Jan-03/6:51 PM
the title alone..gets a ten. lol.