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Lucky (Free verse) by debased
I watch Jenny Jones as my blood rushes with warmth and a small grin stretches across my face Its on girlfriends forced to strip I watch the girls being used and realize how lucky I am to have you

Up the ladder: plain
Down the ladder: sometimes its hard

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8545
Posted: January 10, 2003 8:01 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 8:01 PM PST
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jan-03/8:05 PM | Reply
Jesus?!
here's what it leads too.
sell out.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/stagnantlove.mp3
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