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sometimes its hard (Free verse) by teacup
Sometimes its hard to get myself out of bed in the morning. To face the days trails and tribulations with so little warning. Sometimes its hard to go to sleep at night. When I've got no one here to hold me tight. Sometimes its hard to listen to what everyone has to say. Especially when I try to talk and they walk away. Sometimes its hard not to break down in tears. Everyday it seems I face one of my fears. Sometimes its hard to even care. Everyone seems to be so far out there. But everday in the wee morning hours I get out of bed. And everynight I go to sleep, despite the bad thoughts in my head. Though with difficulty sometimes, to many attention I have paid. And many times on my own I've gotten through the times I was afraid. But sometimes its still hard, to feel like life isn't fair.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8546
Posted: January 10, 2003 10:16 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 10:16 PM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 65.101.210.240 | 10-Jan-03/11:26 PM | Reply
Maybe you should try to turn some of these telling and prosaic sentences into images. Try to find the poetry within each sentence.
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