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Dexpression (Free verse) by Roisin
Hazy muggy waterfalls Of blackening lava Trickle down the sides of my mind Constricting my thought flow Paralyzing my mind. In a crowded room Everyone is an assassin. Eyes seem a threat, Conversation stifling. My handshake Limp and clammy Reads me, Weakens me still. Smiles lie, The grimace behind each one weighs me down As I float towards indifference.

Up the ladder: sometimes its hard
Down the ladder: You are my Star!

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8499
Posted: January 15, 2003 5:51 AM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2003 5:51 AM PST
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[n/a] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 15-Jan-03/5:53 AM | Reply
Ye-es. Not sure what to make of this...maybe another read will do it justice.
[8] thavimatola @ 209.94.133.143 | 28-Sep-03/10:23 PM | Reply
Hope you feel better, Roisin.
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