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Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

Tell me how you feel today I'm here, I care f------ stop staring you know i hate that you b---- come here i'm sorry i didn't mean it did i hurt you? here i'll kiss it heres some flowers whatever you want just don't leave you f------ whore what the hell f------ listen b---- i'll push you to the floor i'm sorry dear don't leave me i'll do anything

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[7] Ranger 10-Jan-03/12:59 AM Reply

You will indeedy

[n/a] Nicholas Jones 10-Jan-03/4:02 AM Reply

I like the twee self censorship of blocking out your own swearwords. My, how Derrida would laugh!

[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 10-Jan-03/7:04 PM Reply

a drastic improvement. what part of michigan are you from..Troy. Southfield.Birmingkam, perhaps Saginaw? you're fired. have an 8

[4] Cha no Onna 10-Jan-03/8:35 PM Reply

It would be a better poem if you took out all the self-censorship and put in the real swear words you were using. It would hit harder. Never self-censor. It cuts the oomph out of your poetry.