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profile of an abuser (Free verse) by inka

Tell me how you feel today I'm here, I care f------ stop staring you know i hate that you b---- come here i'm sorry i didn't mean it did i hurt you? here i'll kiss it heres some flowers whatever you want just don't leave you f------ whore what the hell f------ listen b---- i'll push you to the floor i'm sorry dear don't leave me i'll do anything

Nicholas Jones 10-Jan-03/4:02 AM
I like the twee self censorship of blocking out your own swearwords. My, how Derrida would laugh!




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