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crack of light (Free verse) by inka Darkness fills the room
powdered clouds float about
can't see you so clearly
as you start to fade
walk away
make the distance
between us
look back at me
walk away
with hesitance
the powdered clounds are falling
as i look up at you
ice blue eyes gazing
at the white
of the crack
in the door
flourescent yellow tears fall
roses wither in my hands
the stems become darker
as the light becomes brighter
distance longer
as you walk away
the hesitance stronger
in the doorway
you stand alone
Up the ladder:
Prize gained life, Death in wages
Down the ladder:
Little Miracle
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Posted: January 10, 2003 12:29 AM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 12:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10191 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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10-Jan-03/6:51 PM
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the title alone..gets a ten. lol.
"the powdered clounds are falling" i'm sorry, but you are smoking hard core crack, put the pipe down..take a minute before the powdery clounds come and carry you away.
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)
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