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crack of light (Free verse) by inka

Darkness fills the room powdered clouds float about can't see you so clearly as you start to fade walk away make the distance between us look back at me walk away with hesitance the powdered clounds are falling as i look up at you ice blue eyes gazing at the white of the crack in the door flourescent yellow tears fall roses wither in my hands the stems become darker as the light becomes brighter distance longer as you walk away the hesitance stronger in the doorway you stand alone

<{Baba^Yaga}> 10-Jan-03/6:54 PM
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)




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